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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 1:44 pm    Post subject: To BE Reply with quote

TO BE

A slight breeze of drowsiness caressing my eyes
Delicately arising, an inner stirring
A caressing sweet energy moving inside
Self slowly coming forth, a gentle inkling

Mind moving in an impatient restlessness
Through a constant Enquiry
Self sweetly caressing my Isness
Is this the final discovery?

Still inhabited with fear
An inner desire consuming me
So long hoped for, at last so near
I Amness obsessed to BE
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ANNA



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 2:14 pm    Post subject: Re: To BE Reply with quote

oneness wrote:
TO BE

A slight breeze of drowsiness caressing my eyes
Delicately arising, an inner stirring
A caressing sweet energy moving inside
Self slowly coming forth, a gentle inkling

Mind moving in an impatient restlessness
Through a constant Enquiry
Self sweetly caressing my Isness
Is this the final discovery?

Still inhabited with fear
An inner desire consuming me
So long hoped for, at last so near
I Amness obsessed to BE



Beauty-Full!!!
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If you permit ‘me’, may i write another
version upon your so nice poem?



A slight breeze of drowsiness caressing my eyes
Delicately arising, an inner stirring
A caressing sweet energy moving inside
Self slowly coming forth, a gentle inkling



Mind moving in a patient rest
Releasing ALL Inquireies
Self sweetly caressing my Isness
Discoveries effortlessly arises as knowingness…


In Beingness nothing to fear
Free from all desires
I Amness ever have been and will BE
THAT Nothigness


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oneness



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 2:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Anna,

I wrote that a little while back when I was beginning to read a lot of Ramana's books. You can sense that in that poem.

Your version, very nicely, pictures my Isness, Beingness NOW.

Thank you Very Happy
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ANNA



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 3:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Two swans
welcome oneness
Sunset swan lake


Sunset Swan lake






haiku art


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