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Aurora



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:50 am    Post subject: Haiku try.. Reply with quote

The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity


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ANNA



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Posts: 4093

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:03 pm    Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. Reply with quote

Aurora wrote:
The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity


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The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity




Nanadahaikutry.......lol Very Happy Wink

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Aurora



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:08 pm    Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. Reply with quote

ANNA wrote:

The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity




Nanadahaikutry.......lol Very Happy Wink

Razz Laughing


The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity


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Lydian



Joined: 30 Jul 2007
Posts: 390
Location: UK

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:48 pm    Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. Reply with quote

Aurora wrote:
ANNA wrote:

The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity




Nanadahaikutry.......lol Very Happy Wink

Razz Laughing


The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity




The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso

Slurp

Laughing
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Aurora



Joined: 21 Aug 2006
Posts: 937

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:50 pm    Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. Reply with quote

Lydian wrote:


The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso

Slurp

Laughing


Nice with that "Slurp"-expresso-sound! A modern city-like version of the old "Plop"! Razz Laughing
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