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Aurora
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 Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:50 am Post subject: Haiku try.. |
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The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity
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ANNA
Joined: 16 Oct 2004
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:03 pm Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. |
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| Aurora wrote: | The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity
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The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity
Nanadahaikutry.......lol  
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Aurora
Joined: 21 Aug 2006
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:08 pm Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. |
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| ANNA wrote: |
The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity
Nanadahaikutry.......lol
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The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity
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Lydian
Joined: 30 Jul 2007
Posts: 390
Location: UK
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:48 pm Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. |
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| Aurora wrote: | | ANNA wrote: |
The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity
Nanadahaikutry.......lol
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The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity
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The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso
Slurp
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Aurora
Joined: 21 Aug 2006
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| Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:50 pm Post subject: Re: Haiku try.. |
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| Lydian wrote: |
The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso
Slurp
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Nice with that "Slurp"-expresso-sound! A modern city-like version of the old "Plop"! |
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