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Libra
Joined: 12 Apr 2010 Posts: 518
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:01 pm Post subject: one gone wild |
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It's wonderful
how wild and colorful one can be
From my view
which is really my view
all the voices in here
blend together quite well
Sure,
in a good sit-com
the actors come and go
This is a good forum-com,
sit com, sit and write com
whatever it is I like it
i like the characters
as they are
rich and well defined
sounding like no one
or someone timeless
is difficult and boring for the
reader-consumers
Main characters,
supporting characters
narrator's voice
walk throughs,
cameos,
special guest appearances,
and the ever present
Witness
of it all
of which it is all
of one
or whatever
comedy,
laughter,
fighting,
music / lights/ nudity
We are the creators
I bow
in gratitude
to the wealth
my fellow
actors
bring daily to this stage |
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Kailashana
Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 104
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:07 pm Post subject: |
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Lovely, Libra!
What more could we possibly want other than perhaps *being* the *other* (at least for a few moments).
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makara
Joined: 10 Apr 2010 Posts: 1341 Location: By the ocean, ready for the big one.
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:45 am Post subject: |
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ditto!  |
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