Haiku try..

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Aurora
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Haiku try..

Post by Aurora » Thu Nov 08, 2007 10:50 am

The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity


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ANNA
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Re: Haiku try..

Post by ANNA » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:03 pm

Aurora wrote:The old cliff soundless present
a tree slowly growing in morning light
touching the rocks of eternity


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The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity


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Nanadahaikutry.......lol :D :wink:

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Aurora
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Re: Haiku try..

Post by Aurora » Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:08 pm

ANNA wrote: The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity


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Nanadahaikutry.......lol :D :wink:

:P :lol:
The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity


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Lydian
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Re: Haiku try..

Post by Lydian » Thu Nov 08, 2007 3:48 pm

Aurora wrote:
ANNA wrote: The old man soundless fishing
A fish slowly jumping from the sea
Touching the ocean of eternity


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Nanadahaikutry.......lol :D :wink:

:P :lol:
The old woman quietly resting
slowly wakening up to the bell of childrens laughter
touching the sound of eternity


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The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso

Slurp

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Aurora
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Re: Haiku try..

Post by Aurora » Thu Nov 08, 2007 9:50 pm

Lydian wrote:
The old hills grow dark
slowly the rain sweeps the landscape
I sip my expresso

Slurp

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Nice with that "Slurp"-expresso-sound! A modern city-like version of the old "Plop"! :P :lol:
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